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Every morning of the weekday
I get a moment to walk an aimless walk.
Not both ways, but half of the way;
walking my son to the school block
just three blocks away.
Six fifty in the morning, says the clock;
comfortable coolness outside, with early sun’s ray;
less traffic, fewer bodies to create havoc.
Other parents like me, I meet and see.
The mind is free, the grind has not started for the day.
The fresh, stress-free mind admires all;
admires every little thing on the way.
The minaret of the mosque and its aesthetic globe,
glinting in the rising sun’s rays;
the early morning leaves and flowers on the road,
having bade farewell to their parent plant,
waiting to be swept off
by the foreign helping hands.
The parents and the child combo I see,
the kid a reflection of the elder walking alongside him or her
the resemblance so evident that I wonder
does my kid look like me to that extent?!
I do not know, but I don’t see too much of me in him
but others say he looks like me
Guess only others can see the looks.
One parent I see
a model she used to be
beauty, height, shape, and looks she has that I envy;
But I feel sad for her all the same.
her eyes looks so sad, her cheekbones does not smile
her forehead carries creases that screams.
Somehow I sense in her, a battered and abused wife.
One parent I see,
a housewife I am pretty sure.
Yet, the glamour of her dress that early in the morning
fit for a queen, nothing less.
not overly dressed! Yet elegant, neat, and posh.
A smile on her lips, a radiance on her face
mischief in her eyes, a confidence in her walk.
One parent I see,
a ‘druggie’ he looks to me
No basis, I have for my prejudice.
Nothing other than his looks, a bit untidy;
long untidy hair, a cigarette between his fingers.
Physical features not too attractive,
a pot belly, relatively short, a roughness on his face.
Yet! Yet, the kid that walks by him, he adores I can see;
lovingly he walks her to the class.
Small talk he makes all the way. The look of adoration for her
in his eyes blows my other perception haywire.
I can’t help wonder what his story is.
One parent I see,
the centre of attention she seems to seek.
Dressed, not elegant, yet made up.
Walks with a sprint and gait
all the way walking back home,
a hoard of other parents joining her,
creating a buzz in the air.
One parent I see,
a university student he is, I know.
nice chiseled look, kind eyes, smiling eyes.
a short beard, not glamorous but neatly dressed
always in a shirt and pants, not tucked in.
his kids (two wee ones) walks hand-in-hand
obediently with a mirroring smile just like his.
Such a beautiful image they make.
One parent I am,
dressed way too casually compared to the rest,
jeans and a top, not at all made up!
A loner i am, I know!
one who enjoys the surrounding without chit chatter,
it’s THE moment with myself.
For, the rest of the day I grind myself at work.
Barking orders, asking questions, seeking answers,
solving problems, making plans, following up on tasks,
in meetings, working tiresomely on paperwork;
no rest to the mind until the end of the day
closing it all and hitting my punching bag
this space.
Punch it as much as my fingers and eyes could stand.
I fall in my sack for a short rest for my stiff self.
And this morning walk does wonders
replenishing the mind with energy all around me.
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P.S. The photo above is from an evening ride in Thinadhoo Island,
from a work vacation sometime back.

Another nice post..this one took me back to my past..seven years back!!! ..
Amira! you’re a wonderful blogger and thank you for sharing all these thoughts! I gotta sit and start writing again!
nice comment Flora. Makes me feel good
well done on that.
takes you past seven year back huh!!! I guess your time to walk your child to school is a memory of the past now
And hell yes
you need to write more. You have a clever way of putting your thoughts in words.
Looking forward to read more on your blog
Nice. “A loner i am, I know!
one who enjoys the surrounding without chit chatter
it’s THE moment with myself.”- this part was excellent. As always great job Amira.
thanks Arindam.
it just is a fact.
a loner I am
it takes me a long time to make friends who I can chit chatter with
Nice post,
first lines add me a smile
only the first line?
just kidding. thanks for the visit and the nice words
yup…. there are day way, block clock… you know what…
hehe
ah that rhyming business
I do try to do that if my intention is to attempt a typical poem
I suggest you to take a look at these:
http://mindblur.wordpress.com/2012/01/04/put-me-in-your-arm-2/
http://mindblur.wordpress.com/2012/02/13/to-scratch-thy-brain/
http://mindblur.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/mother-machine-my-strength/
http://mindblur.wordpress.com/2011/10/20/red-faced-green-dot/
Most of the time, I just don’t bother to sit and think about rhyming.
I just write my thoughts as it comes and flows,
I write them in short sentences, and as short lines,
just to make it easy to read, and make it look simple and neat
Oh, what a lovely post once again Amira! You certainly know how to play with words and you do it so well! Awesome photo!
Yes, funny how we see each other. It always makes me wonder how others sees me?
A housewife I am, a loner as well
I don’t like dresses very much at all…
LOL!
Have a great day hon!
*hugs*
thanks Sonel as always for the lovely lovely words
such encouragement keeps me writing more often.
yay to loners
wish a great day to you dear. always
Oh, if I could write like you, no one would ever get me to stop! hehehehe
Yeah, loners rock! We like our own company and we’re never alone because the voices keeps us company..whahahahah!
*big hugs*
Feel like being back from a walk. And I have seen those faces through your words. Very impressive! I like the way it is presented.
oh wow. congratulations on that walk
every single day those thoughts run through my mind as I see the faces.
fianally I manage to capture it in some way
thanks for the nice compliment on it
hehehe something u forgot to write in one parent im .
lol u do the widget thing for the panda
oh
Let me make amends:
One parent I am,
one who tries to oblige as much as I can,
oblige I do, to requests from funny pandas far and near,
setting up award cupboards on wonderful blogs,
blogs that bring humour like none other.
A fascinating look at the world of waiting for the school bell to chime.
Something every Mother or Father has experienced with their little ones.
Everyone seems to have a plan even if it is obeserving the others.
I like the way you broke it down to each individual and the way you introduced
each one.
Very cool post, Amira.
thanks for the nice words Isadora
glad you liked my post.
the walk to the school is always a fascinating one. So many stories I see on the faces of the people I see.
Just a beautiful place where all sorts of people come together. Parents of all sizes, colours, economic backgrounds,
and also kids of so many different types, some so sweet, some a bit snobbish, some who throws tantrums, and some who are just not too happy with school… it’s just a huge book of stories
~~~ : – )
Everyone has a story ….
Happy day to you!
A happy day to you too Elizabeth
so nice of you to leave so many threads to follow
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